Warrior Princess

Aw, this is a sad but cute poem. For the most part you have a nice rhyme and rhythm pattern going; only in the last coupling do I detect a ...

Hello and welcome to this wonderful society of young writers! I am Warrior Princess, Writer of Fantabulous Poetry and Novels That She Never Manages to Finish. I am going to ...

This was . . . just beautiful. Your poetry reminds me a lot of Persephoneia's; is that weird? lol. You have a great way with maintaining a slightly informal tone, ...

Um....short. Very short. But in that shortness you packed a powerful punch. (Please excuse the extremely corny pun.) It's kind of hard to review something so...er...brief, so yeah....I like it. ...

Not in the mood for critiquing (then again, when am I ever in that particaular mood?). XD This was quite lovely, dear. Your poems have this delightful eclecticism (is that ...

OH. MY. GOSH. This--this--was pure genius. Perhaps not flawless, but even the flaws were somehow part of the overall framework. The tiny little details were amazing, as were the honest, ...

OMG!!! This is prettiful!!!! lol well I like this and I don't feel like nitpicking so you're off the hook this time. ;) It paints a lovely picture in my ...

Oh my, bravo! I thought the first draft was good, but this is infinitely better. It's rather short, but then it's sweet too, so I really can't complain. I like ...

I liked this poem a lot, the rhyme actually works, which seems to be a rare thing in most poetry, unfortunately. The only problem I noticed is that at times ...

First one to review!! Oh yeah baby!! :D You never cease to amaze me. Your poetry style is so simple yet so descriptive, sort of like Robert Frost. I love ...

Oh my gosh!! This is wonderful, darling; absolutely wonderful! (How is it that all your stuff seems to fall into that category???) Wow, I really can't find anything wrong with ...

This was good; not spectacular perhaps, but good. The topic is fairly common, especially in poems written by teens, but every now and then someone will come along, take a ...

Oh, oh, oh oh! I know who the beautiful girl in the sky is! She's a rainbow!! (Please tell me I'm right, because otherwise I will have just made a ...

Wow, I like this. This is really good, really powerful. You're imagery was brilliant, your description lovely--well, I think RhaniGrace sums it up pretty well. It made me think of ...

Well I think guitargirl has pretty much covered the grammatical and structural errors and typos, so I'll skip the mundanities (is that even a word?) and get straight to the ...